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Once upon a time, Spike went for a walk.

While on his walk, he was judged by an ancient alicorn, lodged with griffons, parlayed with air pirates, charmed a maiden of a mystical race, and dealt with the scourges of hate, fear, and racism while deliberately drawing the armies of myriad nations to the brink of global war.

Once upon a time, Spike went for a walk, and did all of this so that he could keep a promise to the one that meant the most to him... Twilight Sparkle.


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4ScarfAce4 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Now there's a setup.

Also ... I'm not entirely sure why you keep using the word "whelp" for Spike. I understand that it's a legitimate technical term, but it also has negative connotations. In fact, the only use in the show that I can remember was negative ("Thy backside is whole and ungobbled, thou ungrateful WHELP!")
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I find that it's only negative if you let it be, and I needed something to denote a juvenile dragon. I tried "pup" once, but that went over poorly.
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4ScarfAce4 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hatchling?
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That seems a little "young" to me. He's really in an odd place. I called him a "fingerling" when he was very small, but he's too old for real "newborn" terms, and too young for "juvenile" terms. Why is fan fiction so hard!:D
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4ScarfAce4 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Fair enough ... how about "cub"?
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I dunno, too "mammalian". 
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4ScarfAce4 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Technically, a whelp is also a mammal's offspring.
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Professional Writer
this is good. I am much intrigued by Celestia's response. well done. I simply must get on with the other chapters now ^_^
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad that I was finally able to get them uploaded for you!:)
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Professional Writer
so do I. do not give up on dA... others, like yours truly here, are stupid enough not to know how to find other websites =^^=
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heh... I'm tempted to point you at FIMFiction, but then I'd lose the only person who is consistently commenting on this work here on DA! 
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Professional Writer
then by all means, sir, do not send me there and keep me here instead. By tomorrow, I will find time to start on chapter 10 and shall look forward to other chapters ^_^
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Lurks-no-More Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
I hope you're finding at least some readers here on dA, too!
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Meh, not so many. I basically just consider this a backup in case Knighty ever gets a C&D letter from Hasbro's lawyers!;)
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