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Zenith: Chapter 5 by TheDescendantofKehAn Zenith: Chapter 5 by TheDescendantofKehAn

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Once upon a time, Spike went for a walk.

While on his walk, he was judged by an ancient alicorn, lodged with griffons, parlayed with air pirates, charmed a maiden of a mystical race, and dealt with the scourges of hate, fear, and racism while deliberately drawing the armies of myriad nations to the brink of global war.

Once upon a time, Spike went for a walk, and did all of this so that he could keep a promise to the one that meant the most to him... Twilight Sparkle.


Click here to find the other chapters of Zenith!

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(C) Hasbro Studios, used in parody in satire with respect to copyright.
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4ScarfAce4 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I see what you meant in the journal that kicked this one off ... you're ripping Spike to pieces.
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, it's only getting started.
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4ScarfAce4 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh dear.
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Professional Writer
you were right: I love this part. thee emotions and the hopelessness are so real you could almost taste his trouble and anguish.
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm very glad that I could paint such a vivid set of emotions for you!:)
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Professional Writer
So do I ^_^
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Ryua Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwww, Spike!

You have a beautiful, beautiful touch with emotion. That raw terror of Spike, and the way he's facing that fear, willing to do anything for Twilight is incredible. Really beautifully done. And then you manage to go from fear to sorrow and shame, and it's done so smoothly you just can't help but feel for the little guy...
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I'm glad that I was able to bring those emotions around so well for you!:)
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Ipey1 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is why you're my favorite Spike writer.
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm very glad that I am!:)
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