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Zenith: Chapter 4 by TheDescendantofKehAn Zenith: Chapter 4 by TheDescendantofKehAn

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Once upon a time, Spike went for a walk.

While on his walk, he was judged by an ancient alicorn, lodged with griffons, parlayed with air pirates, charmed a maiden of a mystical race, and dealt with the scourges of hate, fear, and racism while deliberately drawing the armies of myriad nations to the brink of global war.

Once upon a time, Spike went for a walk, and did all of this so that he could keep a promise to the one that meant the most to him... Twilight Sparkle.


Click here to find the other chapters of Zenith!

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(C) Hasbro Studios, used in parody in satire with respect to copyright.
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4ScarfAce4 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
And you drive another hook into my dedication. By the way, is there a reason why the Obelisk speaks Czech? (It's Czech, if anyone wants to use Google Translate.)
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lysok, the artist whose artwork inspired this story, is Czech, so it was in his honor. Also, it makes for a language that "looks" foreign while not being too unfamiliar.
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4ScarfAce4 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, nice touch.

Eastern Europe - the Continent of the Consonant.
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Professional Writer
oh, and one more thing... how can I know what the odd words said by the creature in the Obelisk/Zenith?
and the childish voice... does it belong to the thing in the zenith or have I misunderstood that?
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Drop the lines said by The Obelisk into Google Translate!;)

The child's voice was Spike's, I think. Maybe I confused you? Sorry if I did.
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Professional Writer
thank you ^_^
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Professional Writer
I like this but I was kinda hoping for some blood-boiling scene for Spike with him at least carrying Twi out or cracking the magic-serpents by some unknown will of magic he has within him... well, he is destined for much much more, or so your description says, so I won't fret.
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Based on that, I think you'll find chapter five very... interesting.
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