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Zenith: Chapter 11 by TheDescendantofKehAn Zenith: Chapter 11 by TheDescendantofKehAn

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Once upon a time, Spike went for a walk.

While on his walk, he was judged by an ancient alicorn, lodged with griffons, parlayed with air pirates, charmed a maiden of a mystical race, and dealt with the scourges of hate, fear, and racism while deliberately drawing the armies of myriad nations to the brink of global war.

Once upon a time, Spike went for a walk, and did all of this so that he could keep a promise to the one that meant the most to him... Twilight Sparkle.


Click here to find the other chapters of Zenith!

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(C) Hasbro Studios, used in parody in satire with respect to copyright.
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4ScarfAce4 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Two episodes of intense emotion. Also, I believe, the first time I've seen you work more extensively with Fluttershy.
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
She has her own stories of mine, So Being What We Sow When We Sew, and The Talk, but apart from that I haven't used her too much.
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4ScarfAce4 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
But you've still grasped her pretty well, at least in the context of her friendships.
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for saying so!
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4ScarfAce4 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem at all, my good person.
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Professional Writer
I read this with leisure. I indeed did. perfect right down to the last straw of feeling and emotion. the tenderness is so far good it is not even found in the real show.

I am hooked on this story of yours so don't keep me waiting.
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The next chapter is in front of my editors as we speak!:)
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Professional Writer
this is good. this is really good. you are keeping me in suspense on purpose, are you not?

if you are, then you are doing a good job at it ^_^
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Ryua Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gah... this is just... man, poor Spike. I know I keep saying that, but that's just all I can even think. You did just as perfect a job with Fluttershy and Rainbow as you did with every other character I've seen so far. Man, I want something good to happen for that poor little dragon...
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, I'm so sorry my friend, but it gets worse before it gets better... 
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