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Zenith: Chapter 10 by TheDescendantofKehAn Zenith: Chapter 10 by TheDescendantofKehAn

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Once upon a time, Spike went for a walk.

While on his walk, he was judged by an ancient alicorn, lodged with griffons, parlayed with air pirates, charmed a maiden of a mystical race, and dealt with the scourges of hate, fear, and racism while deliberately drawing the armies of myriad nations to the brink of global war.

Once upon a time, Spike went for a walk, and did all of this so that he could keep a promise to the one that meant the most to him... Twilight Sparkle.


Click here to find the other chapters of Zenith!

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(C) Hasbro Studios, used in parody in satire with respect to copyright.
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4ScarfAce4 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Seems like the two comedy guards are with us to stay ...
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thay certainly have a place and purpose in the story!:)
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4ScarfAce4 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Now i think about it, they add a certain Gore Verbinski touch. Coincidence?
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Professional Writer
I finally got around to reading this and I must say I am impressed.
I do not know why you chose to make Celestia so unresponsiveness to Spike's requests but... if I am to employ my literate sense, and I am guessing here, it so much seems to me that she is not helping him because his quest, whatever it is he must leave Equestria to do, must be one to perform on his own: he must find out the leads and all if he is to succeed in bringing Twilight back, right?

and by the way, I do not think I read anything so well written about our imagination bringing into our view a ghost of someone we love like you did here. well done.
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's a very interesting guess!;)

I'm glad that you liked how I presented Spike having visions of Twilight. I hope that you enjoy the other chapters as well, as I'm hoping to have chapter twelve up soon!:)
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Professional Writer
interesting, huh? ^v^
I hope to read it soon too.
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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Did you see that I have chapter eleven up here, too? You said that you finished it here at ten, but in case you didn't see, eleven is up as well.;)
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Professional Writer
oh, silly me. I knew it but it momentarily slipped my mind. I will make sure to try to read it tonight... if ever I find a time to finish all my work ^_^
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Ryua Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

I am trying so hard to read this, but for some reason my computer has decided PDFs are evil and cannot be opened or downloaded. I will try again on a different computer.

 

I really did like chapter 9. That one I could open. I feel terrible for poor Spike.

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TheDescendantofKehAn Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Let me know if you can't load any of the new chapters.
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