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A somber opening, Spike's loyalty is truly unweaving. He guarded over his friend like a precious jewel. Spike's retelling of their venture lightened the mood. I wonder what the Statue Symbolized I wish to know so badly, I ask for a hint. Then the question about Twilight's mortality, well she become like the alicorns before her goddess of untold powers.
Though you story writing skills are great you seem to have a bit stale dialogue in this chapter. Really is fine once or twice but by the fourth it gets old. Hopefully this won't be a common thing.